Don't get me wrong, it's good, but it's not reading 'dead' enough for me. Have you considered adding an epitaph? Perhaps a URL to an online obituary? Oh, and if you would title it (in the typeface of your choosing) "This Person is Deceased", that would really help get the point across.
This guy ... makes me want to giggle. ^^^^ I wonder where he came from?!
That's my cousin, Amy.... don't mind him and the nonsense comments he always leaves.